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Pointless sprite animation with an unbelievable...well, substitute for a plot. The fact the background was a hodgepodge of images, and the "?" blocks weren't all equally shaped hurt it. The sounds were annoying as well. I mean this with the utmost respect, though, and hope you can take constructive criticism to help with your future work.

GasGames responds:

P.S After reading some comments i'd like to make it clear this was one of my first animations (made it 4 days after i got flash) . I no longer have the FLA file to edit it . Any Way that was 4 years ago and i have developed MUCH more as an animator since then, thnx anyway :)

For an animation test it was fairly better than what is normally put here. It isn't really anything new or exciting, though.

mastersonic3 responds:

Thanks, just wait for my next animation it will be way better.

Brilliantly written, gorgeous scenery. Love the art and animation.

StupidlyEPIC responds:

as always

I'm pretty sure this was a Mexican soap opera.

DingoWalleyStudio responds:

Close! It's a Latin (As in Rome) video game commercial! XD

Enjoyed the animation, but the sound seemed very off and terrible.

StasBogdanov responds:

I apologize for the sound!

Too may things I didn't understand. Why the hell did the guy have a tan line where a wedding ring would be? Is he cheating or recently divorced? Why was he holding his fingers up so they could talk to each other? Ah well, wasn't bad at all. I enjoyed it.

laneyboy007 responds:

The Tan is for a later story and as far as holding his hand up this the world of CARTOON my friend.

The sound was too off for this to be enjoyable, and the voice acting was not great. The animation was bad, even though the art itself was good(in other words, it didn't look great when they moved are talked)

DangerousBob responds:

Update: Just fixed the sound sync issues. My sound was set to Event not Stream. As for the rest of the video, sorry you didn't like it.

Okay, funny, but some of the slides that had dialogue went too fast and I couldn't read it. Not all, but there were some. Also, there should be a play button instead of it being on a loop.

fnrevolution responds:

i guess next time instead of doing the dialogue in one take i sound do each on separately so that way some of the pictures are not rushed, so that way my audience may read it. and i should have used the newgrounds upload play button, and that you for the helpful review vg!

This was well animated, but pointless. The second guy doesn't even move his mouth when he talks or sighs.

The squirrel just seemed to be moved around and didn't look like it was moving itself. No lie, it was kind of(extremely) annoying, but not bad for a first submission. It would have been better if it had more life to it.

Ronga1979 responds:

Thank you for leaving your responce. I agree with what you said. I will aprove on this in the future. Thank you for you imput. :-) I am new to this. and really enjoying working with flash.

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